Open Poetry #34 |
Maxwell Street |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Her womb a gash through which she was wounded— I once knew a woman split in two |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
interesting, i dont know the meaning you intended..but i take away my own thoughts on this....and the imagery is powerful, bold... im keeping this for my library |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
What muted said... I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it. But anyone can take something from it and have it be powerful to them. I like that... Well done Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
war |
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