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Ericc
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0 posted 2004-11-01 04:46 PM



Without words...

A poet writes with fallen
tears.

And leaves behind the
damp expression...

Of what was never said.

© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-01 04:49 PM


Yes...how very true.
This is beautiful !
Hugs to you Eric~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-11-01 05:00 PM


Ericc
Enjoyed the read.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-01 05:03 PM



Sir, this is a very tangible poem.
Your ability to say so much
with so little continues
to inspire me.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-11-01 05:04 PM


So true  

M

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-01 05:09 PM


Yes...
Magnus
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6 posted 2004-11-01 05:18 PM


Done it again, haven't you.  A trademark
post, very nicely done.

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7 posted 2004-11-01 05:22 PM


Like it

Dave

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Eternity
8 posted 2004-11-01 05:43 PM


... and vapors rise
to fill my eyes
with the essence
of the poet's pure love,
the heart knows its scent
it needs nothing else


Very beautiful and very touching, dear Eric!

I love you.
Margherita

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woven by a poet's loom
9 posted 2004-11-01 06:40 PM


And well said is this.
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10 posted 2004-11-01 07:00 PM


so true...so true...

~Alli~

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ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2004-11-01 07:51 PM


Perfect!
TD

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12 posted 2004-11-01 08:10 PM


eric
your words touch
this time they touch and inspire thank you...h

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displaced
13 posted 2004-11-01 08:45 PM


damn
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2004-11-01 11:24 PM


Nice writing...James
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15 posted 2004-11-01 11:51 PM


Ericc... so true !!

Hope

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16 posted 2004-11-02 01:19 AM


Excellent - straight to the core with no frills.  Amazing!
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17 posted 2004-11-02 02:00 AM


your words are always
so beautifully expressed

K

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18 posted 2004-11-02 07:05 AM


You've been quite the inspiration!
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19 posted 2005-01-17 02:32 PM


Oh..how awesome is that...! great little ditty!!  

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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20 posted 2005-01-17 02:34 PM




You say it so well, Eric.

Enjoyed!

~tier

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21 posted 2005-01-17 04:09 PM


Well said Eric.

Dave

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22 posted 2005-01-18 04:01 AM


yes how true this is   very nice


GG
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Lost in thought
23 posted 2005-01-18 04:03 AM


Exactly.
Yep... you've got it.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
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24 posted 2005-01-18 06:30 AM


so true, so so true!!!!
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25 posted 2005-01-18 08:44 PM


nodding with you here

I like the spaces inbetween best too

enjoyed this Ericc

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