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In Time I Realized
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In Time I Realized |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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images of home where childhood’s memories grew gone in earth and tide prayers for your safety your memory's landscape died oh god, all the people too ©2005 by icebox |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite powerful these few words, a chain of unruly seas, wave upon wave... How great the power and precision of our earthly home. Sure drew up the emotions Icebox. Very well done. TD |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
concise, straight to the heart literally and figuratively |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Time....just a minute, can take or give so much!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A very scary realization indeed. My home town, where I was born, was on the news this weekend. Flooding..  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such an all-encompassing piece here. Change always eroding the surface. .....jo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
woah... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes in those brief moments there was such tremendous devastation Hope |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
~nod~ Rf |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
How humble we become when we see and feel that which turns our shores into such as it does. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~feeling this one~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
felt this too |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Ouch... this aches and stings. And really nothing else can be said. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
You said so much so quickly. What a powerfully sad peice. Thank you. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
icebox, again you just amaze me. Thank you deeply for this touching piece, marty |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How you manage this just amazes me. Never sticky sentimental, but raw power of emotion I could see you rubbing your head, m'friend. *hearthugs* dear one |
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