Open Poetry #34 |
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Pale Shade Moon |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
![]() Pale Shade Moon Artist’s brush of morning sun First day after turn of time Pale shade moon glowing light Still in reach of mine Reds and golds of green gone fall Orange come yellows, too Find me well in softest light In early cool of dew Leaf would hold still harvest moon Gifts to bring my way If I a moment could capture this T‘would please my every day Pale shade of moon gone light Sun overtakes your means Weave for me in morning bright A fall to bring me dreams Pale shade moon that harbors schemes Bring to all, blessed imaginings. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, you've got your sunshining brightly again, this is a beaut! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Smiling at you at this it's gorgeous Many hugs Kari ![]() Mxx Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Pale shade of moon gone light Sun overtakes your means Weave for me in morning bright A fall to bring me dreams" Lovely! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"If I a moment could capture this T‘would please my every day" Ah, but you did capture this, my friend ... you did. Beautifully done. Such a lovely autumn read. ![]() Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A beautiful autumn song...I needed to sing one before I went to work..thanks for the lyrics... ---------ice/ford Come read to me some poem, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
loved your new picture, your a beautiful lady, in heart mind and soul outstanding picture, and october sounds...lovely |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is truly beautiful! Love your new pic too! ![]() ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: What a very special altruistic ending! And a fantastic picture to go with. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A beautiful picture...painted with words. Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always write of beauty |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
this piece definitely awakens fall in me... love the new picture, and I agree with the "you're a beautiful lady...in all respects..." but nothing's changed there since I've be aquainted with you.... jimmy |
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