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Open Poetry #34
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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
0 posted 2004-11-01 03:26 PM

Eyes
staring
to each other
Wanting
Yearning
to feel
Him
Wanting
and Yearning
to feel you
Wanting
Yearning

But
feet moving
the other way
trying
trying so hard
to unlock
your vision

Glancing backwards
His eyes still
Staring
and Wanting
and Yearning
but
you're gone.
Hoping
to soon
feel this
Wanting
and Yearning
to feel him
Wanting
and Yearning
to feel you
Wanting and Yearning
for him
again.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-11-01 04:49 PM

I think I know this feeling

M
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-11-01 09:06 PM

well put!
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2004-11-01 09:26 PM

Yep, understand and agree....well put, my friend.

jwesley
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4 posted 2004-11-01 09:33 PM

great write . . . enjoyed.

~Alli~

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