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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-02-12 08:57 AM

Heart to Heart

I've pressed my fingers
over the intent of you
and words meant in silent hold
remembering the treasured,
the gallery of touch.

The embossing behind the blue
triumphs the valentine,
the sweet token that gifts love
to another, leaving prints
upon a heart.

I find my way through the depth of you
wearing the charmthoughts
that flood my mind
and overflow in smiles
that would reflect in your eyes, if near.

I've been there, in that mirror
waiting for the other side to reach out,
pull me in, untangle my mind,
join me in quiet confidence
and rise above the myst that reigns~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2005-02-12 10:12 AM

Maureen,
When the sun comes out the myst that reigns
will disappear. Good write

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2005-02-12 10:56 AM

" ... leaving prints upon a heart"

Like this thought, have too many claw marks of my own!!

Very sensual to my heart!

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

3 posted 2005-02-12 10:57 AM

Oh, can I ever feel this one's reflecting and aching within me. Exceptionally written. (Sigh) Happy Valentine's Day to you. -Bob

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-12 01:23 PM

M

love the last verse especially

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-12 05:58 PM

Beautiful write!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-02-12 09:02 PM

Never get between two mirrors.

They reflect was is, blur into what might be, and grasp projections of what was.

I liked the words.

Dave

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2005-02-12 09:05 PM

the pull and push of the tides
very much felt thru this

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2005-02-12 11:20 PM

Nice poem, Maureen!

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