Open Poetry #34 |
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Heart to Heart |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Heart to Heart I've pressed my fingers over the intent of you and words meant in silent hold remembering the treasured, the gallery of touch. The embossing behind the blue triumphs the valentine, the sweet token that gifts love to another, leaving prints upon a heart. I find my way through the depth of you wearing the charmthoughts that flood my mind and overflow in smiles that would reflect in your eyes, if near. I've been there, in that mirror waiting for the other side to reach out, pull me in, untangle my mind, join me in quiet confidence and rise above the myst that reigns~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, When the sun comes out the myst that reigns will disappear. Good write |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
" ... leaving prints upon a heart" Like this thought, have too many claw marks of my own!! Very sensual to my heart! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Oh, can I ever feel this one's reflecting and aching within me. Exceptionally written. (Sigh) Happy Valentine's Day to you. -Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M ![]() love the last verse especially |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Beautiful write! ![]() ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Never get between two mirrors. They reflect was is, blur into what might be, and grasp projections of what was. I liked the words. Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the pull and push of the tides very much felt thru this |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nice poem, Maureen! |
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