Baby Blondes - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #34

Baby Blondes

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

0 posted 2005-02-12 02:55 AM

You wear motherhood well m' friend
on happy sleeves you live
and hope your dreams
and work your troubles
to baby blondes you give
Days of boys and sunfire hills
and Def and Nazareth are gone
days we'd never thought we'd see
are filled
with baby blondes

He is so fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose - Jim Elliot

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2005-02-12 04:56 AM

CB
I like this...

A mixture of some things lost, but a greater thing gained...Nostalgia and new horizons....good mixture of emotions...good poem

__________ice/ford
><>

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-02-12 03:47 PM

Ditto ice!  I love your smooth blending.  Words to remember:
          " and hope your dreams
           and work your troubles "

                miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-02-12 03:49 PM

I have to admit I didn't get this one when I read it earlier...but now I see

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

4 posted 2005-02-12 05:54 PM

Thanks all - old friends are a precious thing

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-02-12 07:07 PM

Very nice write.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2005-02-12 08:45 PM

Life does change when changing and changing again does come. (Smiles) Enjoyed reading. -Bob

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.