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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-02-11 06:36 PM


My love


You walked in a distant sunset and suns glistened and they chose to shine in your hair

You spun in my eyes colours I could never understand as you took the fragrance of the mist twisted to a cloak hiding light

You walked in darkness as a fear a threat a danger

You were a whisp in a thought in an image in substance enveloping yourself

You approached in light in darkness in power

Picked up in one hand I had to made some approach at the beginning as power corrupts and absolute power corrupts absolutely

And we never acknowledge that power wanes

And strength develops

And thoughts always exist and don’t forget


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-02-12 04:44 AM


This power of love seems still strongly present.
Love, Margherita

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-02-12 05:26 PM


Margherita

I dont know that the power of love leaves.

It is I suppose, what you love and why.

The words were easy to write and the day still stays with me but a very long time ago and before Summer's Morn became an idea which was about 6 years later.

Dave


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california
3 posted 2005-02-12 08:40 PM


i like this one


DavePage
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4 posted 2005-02-12 08:47 PM


Thanks Marsha.

regards

Dave

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