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Iced high
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Iced high Clear clean tonal archaic symbols woven along this gray morn, where line/s/wipes were lending dance leaving exotic gifts, treasured secrets ~ at least, it all appeared to me that way… in early morning light when snow’s melt trailed my window and met air's gasp on winter, icing the tears before they were wipered clear leaving skeletal lines angled and streamed, frozen trails of tongue talk, or written poetry of other languages, my gaze grazed the glaze through otherwise white streets where lights cherried red through these crystal figments of imagination’s sound, leaving, yes, leaving poetry iced high. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
of other languages, my gaze grazed the glaze through otherwise white streets where lights cherried red through these crystal figments of imagination’s sound, leaving, yes, leaving poetry iced high. oh....yessss.............  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a vivid description of the morning |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Wow...you are the master. This is so clear, so clean, so good! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where lights cherried red through these crystal figments of imagination’s sound, leaving, yes, leaving poetry iced high. yes, morning is like that, incredible descriptions and images Kari...thank you for sharing |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Fine words for such images. I'm glad I read this one. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You are such a joy to read, lady! Imagery is one of your really stronge suits and you sure wear it well in this one.  ......jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh....wow...love it!! Wonderful images flashed through my mind as I read. In the midst of winter, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love finding poetry... and how sometimes it just appears, or maybe it just is, and we can take it and punctuate it, and come out with beauties like this. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very vivid Karilea.....beautiful indeed... ~~*~~ |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful inside and out, your language here is superb....~P |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes leaving its poetry written within the drops on sills of wet rain |
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