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| Open Poetry #34 |
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Mississippi Magic |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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She saw him, tall as the trees, wearing a smile of silk...a gift of song and a ten gallon hat that hid the gleam of his eyes... A warm summer’s night, music floating across the ripples...waves gently lapping the weathered sides of a vintage boat. Destiny drove them....as hidden currents tugged at two hearts and lights danced beneath a shimmering moon... A kiss, held back....an embrace that never came....a bond that never broke, a vow that never shattered... He smiled softly as she slept, there in his arms....along a river of forgotten dreams...and remembered moments when the dance was danced alone... In wait of when....of where... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ A mile and a half of *sighs* at this heart-touching render~ *Huglets*Hugs: ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish you could have heard my sigh at the end of that! Now that was real "Bridges Of Madison County" stuff there m'friend, and I loved it! |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
though I will always follow my Destiny, ... I will always dream of the smiles of Hope, and the hold of Faith .... You've got the ladies swooning on this one my friend! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I love Mississippi - and some serious magic has been woven there for me in my life - you captured the beauty of a night on the river so well - loved it Barry-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow good to read you again! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Barry, this IS magical, it flows right into the heart ... Love, Margherita  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The ending line could have begun this lovely, and finished it, just so... a magical tale, it most certainly is... weave one again, soon. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A warm summer’s night, music floating across the ripples...waves gently lapping the weathered sides of a vintage boat. Sighs...I've missed reading you, glad your back...how lovely |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Swish and you lit the night. Well done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...................Sorry, I couldn't break away from my reverie along that Mississippi River! ~ and you were the man in the ten-gallon hat!  This was a highly appealing reading experience! Siiiiiiggggggghhhhhhhhing! Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry...you know you had me from the title! This is truly a sigh maker! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
She saw him, tall as the trees, wearing a smile of silk...a gift of song and a ten gallon hat that hid the gleam of his eyes... Okay...I'm a puddle of mush...swoooon hugs, Chris |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"A kiss, held back....an embrace that never came....a bond that never broke, a vow that never shattered..." Masterful penned, BJ!  ....jo |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
The way you weave words is absolutely stunning... Beautiful. |
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