Open Poetry #34 |
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You are Mine [for TO&O, her own, and Paige] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
You are mine You snuck in peering round my corners as I careened through life then you grabbed my heart At first you held on to me tightly so tightly we shared cooing and you were dependent on my many moods But as things go we both had a lot of growing to do even when there were days we collided together in laughter there were other days we bruised egos Still, you were mine I tried desperately to recall how it was for me before you the struggles would not always come back because I was placed in this “place” and had to take on the roles created by loving you For you were mine. Soon, too soon you loosened your grip and explained you no longer needed me while it was expected it still hurt for you were still mine. In the letting go there was a sense of freedom for both but at what cost I wonder if I am still as much yours as you are still mine only time, and your own children, will tell, will know, will sense... I’m here. ~*~ (c)2001 revised 2005 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"In the letting go there was a sense of freedom for both but at what cost I wonder if I am still as much yours as you are still mine only time, and your own children, will tell, will know, will sense... I’m here." How true these feelings of a mother for her child.. how hard to let them go and grow. We all need to be needed which makes it all the more difficult. This is lovely...wonderful feelings straight from your heart. Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is wonderful, my friend... Sharpen a bit and this will be extra-ordinary ![]() Have missed this place, Regards Sudhir P.S. you now stand at 50000 plus, WOW, you have remained home... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (02-10-2005 05:11 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely the most beautiful gift a mother can give her children is the gift from her heart. You just gave yours again lady, as I know you have many many times. Hugs to all of you! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wow....... have no words...... just wow sigh |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This... is beautiful in its own right... and then touches deeper, making me wonder what might have been if time had been kinder. *S* |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ladies, Sudhir, thank you. Babies come in all shapes and sizes, all new, all aging...and they, to some, remain "our babies". One of the harshest things I ever heard was when my own youngest said, "Mom! Quit calling me your baby! I hate that!" One of the most beautiful things I ever heard was when my own youngest, after having two of her own, said, "Mom? Never quit calling me your baby. I understand, now." ![]() |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
Thanks mom it took me a min to know what TO&O was! LOL, I Love you so much! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie How did I miss this? So sweetly loving! ![]() |
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