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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-12-04 12:04 PM


Suddenly I'm In Love with You

Everytime you desired to find
a resting place in my arms,
I would open them wide to you.
You could stay with me all thru
the night every time you wanted too.
I would hold you nice and tight
all night and in the morning I would
give you a kiss goodbye, and then
I would miss you while you're gone
and here's the  reasons why...because
no matter how many time we're close,
we never come close to being through.
My heart shares these affections too...
Suddenly I find myself in love with you.

JamesLee
December03
2004

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-12-04 03:46 AM



Love is the greatest gift of all to have at Christmas.....

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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2 posted 2004-12-04 04:14 AM


i have missed your romantic heart
this is beautiful


whiskey
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3 posted 2004-12-04 07:36 AM


What a lovely write, I very much enjoyed reading it what a bit of romance does for ones soul
James_A_Fraser
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4 posted 2004-12-04 10:26 AM


I'd say that only the finding was sudden-- love's been there all along.

Nice capture on this poem, sir! You took me right with you for the whole ride.



~~J

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5 posted 2004-12-04 02:32 PM


A beautiful write James.  Nicely written.

~Alli~

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6 posted 2004-12-04 02:36 PM


You made me smile with this one James..
I am so happy for you~

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7 posted 2004-12-04 02:57 PM


big smiles here
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2005-02-17 11:53 PM


Thank you all for the beautiful responses...James
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