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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2005-02-10 09:16 AM



To my Valentine


I will never rest
and nothing will stop
nor stand in the way
until your heart
is completely satisfied
and wanting for
nothing more

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart



© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07
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where ever the fly fishing is good
1 posted 2005-02-10 09:39 AM


Helen is that a promise or a threat? lol
good write

icebox
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in the shadows
2 posted 2005-02-10 09:47 AM


Wow!  Clearly put!!!



passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-10 10:05 AM


pure devotion
Krawdad
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4 posted 2005-02-13 10:56 PM


I'm tempted to caution against sleep deprivation here, but you do have a determined sense!

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iliana
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5 posted 2005-02-14 04:01 PM


Hi, Helen.  Happy Valentine's Day.  Hope your heart is full and happy like the wish in this sweet write.   ....jo
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