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It Fell
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It Fell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Fell It fell and lit the sky a sight A rainbow in the black of night That beckoned me to walk its lie And not to ask its how or why I walked the path from tint to hew And wondered in a sky of blue Drank the mist before it fell And felt the awe of rainbows spell The road was full of sheer delight With trees reflecting rainbows light The air was full of lilac sweet And I was dancing down the street And bells rang out in baritone To pierce my skin down to the bone And love surrounds my heart and mind To touch the soul of humankind A lovely rainbow in the night Took me to a heavens delight |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
morning sy nice write and happy belated bday |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The road was full of sheer delight With trees reflecting rainbows light The air was full of lilac sweet And I was dancing down the street ~*~ I'll bet you can give Gene Kelly a high-spirited kick for his money... Enjoyed this smile, Sy!    |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good Morning Sy OMG, it's your birthday????? Well, then, a big applause, hugs and kisses (on the cheek of course) hehe, for a wonderful day, or belated if that be the case...but have another perfect day today... every day is your birthday...smiles thank you for sharing a lovely write this morning |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
rainbows form in unexpected places on roads marked with tires, broken glass and litter, they form wanting to be heard thanks for the rainbow today  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I had always wondered if one could see a rainbow at night nicely done Sy |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T., you have a beautiful soul ~ and spirit...  I loved this poem more than I can truly express!  Angel hugs 'n kisses, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It fell and lit the sky a sight A rainbow in the black of night That beckoned me to walk its lie And not to ask its how or why I walked the path from tint to hew And wondered in a sky of blue Drank the mist before it fell And felt the awe of rainbows spell The road was full of sheer delight With trees reflecting rainbows light The air was full of lilac sweet And I was dancing down the street And bells rang out in baritone To pierce my skin down to the bone And love surrounds my heart and mind To touch the soul of humankind A lovely rainbow in the night Took me to a heavens delight ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I know Im a tardy moth...(still fighting this flu bug) ... but I had to come back and get this one to tell you just how absolutely delightful it is...you can not read this poem without smiling...one of your best Sy-guy...full of your poetic gifts of imagery, symbolism, and cadence...it read aloud with pure harmony...you are the grooviest of the winkies. *L*  *ww*    Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I chose the black of night to  your charming write~LOVE IT !! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soulfisher Thank you so much. Sunshine Who can ask for anything more than a smile from the sun. LeeJ And thank you for the OMG. inkedgoddess, Anytime, passing, In a dream you can see anything. Earth Angel If I may, HUGS and KISSES back. JM, I told you to drown the bug in chicken soup. winkiewinkie PS you always give me a boost with your replies. Marge, You are a charmer. |
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