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When Two Souls Meet
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When Two Souls Meet |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Two souls meet, searching through the darkness, Their love, a light,glowing within their hearts, Shines forth across the miles of loneliness, Miles that separate only their bodies, For their minds, souls, and their hearts meet, Every night underneath the same sky, the same moon, She hears the words to his lovely tune, The tune of his heart, playing the part, Of his sad, sorrowful cry,longing for her by his side, He thinks of her with every thought, every memory, Her words bare such love and truth, like no one he has ever knew, She cannot escape his mind, his heart has spread it's wings, flying to the one ever so true, Someday, somehow, they will meet face to face, eye to eye, feel eachothers embrace, Soul meeting soul, joined together forever, Their souls will combine to one, Leaving their bodies without a trace, Joined into eternity, a soulmates resting place... Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Quite beautiful and heatfelt, your poems speak from the caverns of thy heart, it echos and resonates around the world, and makes the readers feel special... Thank you ... Goldenrose.x Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I thought this one would touch you  You are very welcome! ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Their souls will combine to one, Leaving their bodies without a trace," Well, yes, that is how it works; this loss of self terrifies most personalities at the moment of real choice. Clearly an inspired write. I wish you well,and the safety of eternity. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks ice... I am one not to be scared, when making that choice... when you loose self..you gain the whole world!...glad you could see into me... ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
All I can say is...WOW!!  Becka |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this is very touching and beautiful  |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
simply put...beautifully written does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Written from an interesting prospective, with great confidence by the observer. Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
In comparisen, Love can make the world seem like such a very very small place as so indicated in your poem... (Sigh) "...Miles that separate only their bodies, For their minds, souls, and their hearts meet, Every night underneath the same sky, the same moon..." This is so beautiful and so encourageing I think especally for those here at this site who do have and enjoy long distance retationships. Thank you for sharing. -Bob |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bumping this back to the top ARH...simply because it belongs there. Loved it! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
BEAUTIFUL!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Stumbled across this and thought I would bump it back to the top again. Still love this. You have not been posting lately and missing your writings. Are you okay? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love your new pic! |
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