Open Poetry #34 |
hemmed by sea-salt and crowned stars |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
the night, is eccentric hemmed by sea-salt and crowned stars and the ocean, hums like a ghost with all it’s mysteries, beached: i trace its lines and my eyes, seek the curves of you and I swell, just like it beloved in all it’s blue motion where I see your eyes and the white-wash that spills from them and i thrust, like the south wind on the edge of this land wet with fog and rain to curl round you and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
and the ocean, hums like a ghost with all its mysteries, beached: Great lines and imagery in this piece. Magnetic. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Fantastically romantic, and a real piece of art. A keeper! I love this poem! .....jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
to curl around you this gives me the feeling of being wrapped up in the silky sand right when the sea gets sleepy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
to curl... yes... special Maree write sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Creatively expressive and sensuous. Remarkably romantic. A very enjoyable read! EA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Your most special muse, is the ocean! This was just so splendid! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this last night, little one... and was quite taken with it - so much so, it sent me off in reflection... so I needed to come back and tell you, thank you... for all of your many and varied talents... and for sharing them with all of us. Mama K |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"where I see your eyes and the white-wash that spills from them" Loved it wholly, but like these words the best. Thanks, Billy 8) "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hemmed by sea-salt and crowned stars ========================= you had me from the title on. I dont know how you do this..but you always do...consistantly you create lush imagery with succinct verse and poetically brilliant personif and symbolism. Beautiful penning poetess Maree. Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Ah so sensuous your natural images...~P |
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