Open Poetry #34 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When a heart finds love It cannot list Definitive reasons For this one and not that It simply says "mine." When my heart found you Logic said no. But throughout all seasons We belong together Forever entwined. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sounds definitive to me:“Mine” Beautiful sentiment in this write. Enjoyed. JL |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"It simply says "mine." love that line... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you both. *S* The irony of this is now choking me... but I do appreciate your kindness! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSweetSuthernGal~ How this one chokes me up ... oh my ... you've written a slice of my heart too~ Thinking of you ... tenderly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, goodness, Suthern. I felt this one! I have to just look away from logic and listen to my heart. Hugs, Ethel |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
At times you regret that it is true. Really good words. Dave |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you all so very much. *S* I wrote this as part of a contest... my muse was appalled that she was supposed to come up with something in 2 minutes... I could barely type for her shuddering. *S* Thanks for liking the result! *S* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Like indeed -- I love! This is really good. ...psst...go write fast some more....!!! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ratleader: From your lips to my muse's ear... please! LOL Thank you... so much. *S* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
IWIHWT! Truly a pleasure to read, suthern! and with that, she grabs it, running quickly to shelve it in the library... misc'e |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Belle, what you have found, may it never become lost! Only someone who wears "Spock" ears is able to put logic before heart! ~ and you have very lovely ears! Affectionate hugs, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
micellanea & Earth Angel: Why am I not surprised that two of my favorite people gift me with such smiles? miscellanea's sprint and EA's Spock ears... just what I needed. *S* Thank you both very much! *S* |
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