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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
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0 posted 2005-02-09 07:44 AM



Moth

I heard the silence of the night
Intruding on my thought
Profound recesses of my mind
Within in her lamplight caught

In bug-eyed fix upon a flame
Just as a mindless moth
Attuned that any meager sound
Ignite the simplest thought

Prolific mind, your song is hushed
When silences intrude
For earth devoid of beast or man
Engraves my solitude

The ear requires a cradle song
To soothe its slumbering eye
And any sound produced by life
Is like a lullaby

Oh, humming buzz! A fly ! A lifeline!
Unsuspecting friend!
Makes silence flutter from the wick
So I can think again


Elizabeth Santos


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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-09 08:18 AM


Liz, this is so very peaceful and serene,
imagaes outstanding. Very well done gal.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-09 08:28 AM


your so incredibly beautiful...from which those words are born...tremendous read my friend...thank you

Hugs

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-02-09 11:11 AM


what an ending!
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-02-09 01:38 PM


You too?  I love "white noise"...
I'm alone, but not...
those background sounds just, well,
fill in the background so my thoughts
are pushed to the fore...
and more...

they provide the songs that allows
heartdance...

and, heh...shake my groove...

Libraried!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
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5 posted 2005-02-09 01:50 PM


(Smiles) Delightful. -Bob
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