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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-09 07:40 AM


smoking coffee at the olsen pen
and cin says woodies are pretty
when she leans down her mountains

to make the leather men forget
there is just another ocean
beyond the swerve of those curves

and the smiles from those eyes
looking through the outer windows
of a statue's other soul

taking time reading minds perhaps
or maybe she's just watching
a day dream from the other side

of an almost sunday's wishing well


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dark (scribblenote: mrs olsen's on the beach, hidden, locals go there...surfer cafe with a view

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-02-09 08:47 AM



Pour me another cup, please?

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-02-09 09:00 AM


incredible
Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-09 10:14 AM


the flow
the feel
ocean seams and mountain dreams -

morning D-

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2005-02-09 11:07 AM


thanks ladies for the eyes..
and susan you are cute
with your little heart on

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-02-09 11:07 AM


watching a day dream from the other side

very cool!

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2005-02-09 11:08 AM


PS...thanks lady friend..

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