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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Calm reverberating peace, expression of deep concentration, soothing as you hold my body silently in your mind the thought escapes your eyes, weaves through gentle words, dances through intricate vibrations of a strum plunging, drowning my awareness in a sweet mist of chaotic intoxication. Prison of souls I lose time itself in your face - a breathtaking aura of radiance soft entrancing entrapment angel has come to haunt me, made me a slave of your presence now wake me and tell me you're real. How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
River A literate write and quite reveling, enjoyed the read. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write! Enjoyed!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful! ~~*~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really, really like this, especially those last two stanzas! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so cool and I like your name, River! Cool! SauniSauni:) I shall allow no man to belittle my soul by making |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write I enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh, so very very beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
plunging, drowning my awareness in a sweet mist of chaotic intoxication. Yes, the drug of love well described sigh |
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