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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2005-02-08 08:09 AM



we wore our pretends
untucked and loose fit
with room for our hands

to look for pockets
and you said there was change
in yours, deep

you loved how it felt
spent and slippery
I said mine had a tummy

with hungry mouth skin
and would you kiss it sometime
when your lipstick smiled

you said you may starve me now
that you have tested and tasted
how my famous was famished

and your lunchbox was the star
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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2005-02-08 08:10 AM


grinnin*

just grinnin....

you already know I loved this....

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-02-08 08:29 AM



Dang...
all my lunchbox ever held
was bologna...


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-02-08 10:44 AM


Dark - damn the lunchboxes - am opening a cafeteria - a 24/7 - hehe -

love this - come dine with me -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
4 posted 2005-02-08 11:14 AM


gs...wanna do lunch? hehe thanks lady

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sunshine..hmmmmmmmmmmm who was talking?  (grin)
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susan, come to the beach baby, we can eat all the "sand which is" there.. sorry...had a silly bug bite me.  thanks hon

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-02-08 11:26 AM


how ya wanna do it babe?  take out?  
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