Open Poetry #34 |
Body and Mind |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Body and Mind My body sleeps my mind awake Illusion has my sails in take I try to guide my ship on course But cannot fight illusions force I see a rainbow in the sky Butterflies o’er the flowers fly And valley’s green are in the scene While spirits glean the fields in preen Weeping willows weep in shade A place to hide the heat of glade A place to lay my thoughts in test A place to make a nest to rest She waits for me on Eden’s shore But stands behind an apples core Sending fumes of changing grime That eats my path with acids time But even time will bow to when And we will be together then. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Sy, good morning...lovely dreams here enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good morning Sey. Enjoyed this. Hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Weeping willows weep in shade A place to hide the heat of glade A place to lay my thoughts in test A place to make a nest to rest" How inviting this place sounds! Wonderful thoughts you leave us with this morn. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoyed meandering through this one, Sy... it seemed very warm, close and familiar... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But even time will bow to when And we will be together then." loved this part.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Weeping willows weep in shade ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ you get extra winkies for that line. *ww* Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, those rainbows and butterfly and flowers.... if they are an illusion, at least they are pleasants ones! Sy, I agree with you and believe those last two lines. .......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends above, had a busy week but I love you all, thank you. |
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