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Open Poetry #34

Mother's Senryu

kayjay
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Oregon

0 posted 2005-02-08 12:57 PM

Mother's Senryu

Mother's concerns zoom
Daughter's future hangs by thread
Mother's temper too

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2005-02-08 01:43 AM

thanks for such a tender write!

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2005-02-08 02:22 AM

yep...that's what it's like!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-02-08 09:01 AM

Gee these thoughts really ring true Ken.
Well done m'friend...well done!
Hugs & Such~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2005-02-08 09:02 AM

Truer words were never spoken! Well done sir.

Martie

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California

5 posted 2005-02-08 09:02 AM

Yep...you got that right Ken!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-02-08 09:04 AM

Two alike, they are
Strengths become them, either one
Frustration's whimsy

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

7 posted 2005-02-08 12:18 PM

Oh those mother concerns .... indeed!

This is so well said and contains a whole story.

Love, Margherita

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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8 posted 2005-02-08 09:34 PM

lol......no really, you are quite on the mark, Ken! I think something all mothers experience. Appreciated here.

....jo

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