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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-02-08 07:10 AM


How Long?

How long for her to find the core
Where I will meet her at the door
How many living turns of prime?
Will pass within the neck of time

How many skins how many bones
How many shins how many moans
How many winds to fill the sail
To catch Horizon and our bail

A garden waits for us to stay
If only we could find the way
A cup of wisdom just a sip
As does a kiss upon the lip

To be co joined when all is done
To find the core where we are one
To ride the bell of fever’s chime
To stay the hand of changing time

It stays a whisper in my mind
And stays a place I cannot find


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-08 08:28 AM



Shangrila-la-la-la-la...
It fills your pen, Sy...
indeed it does...




Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-02-08 08:44 AM


Sey, this makes me want to stay forever within your rhyme....

you make the winds chime doll.  

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-02-08 10:50 AM


Sunshine
Love you too.

Gentle
Sweet comment, thank you,

Margherita
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4 posted 2005-02-08 11:42 AM


To be co joined when all is done
To find the core where we are one


We are all on the way ... holding hands with you, dear Sy, discovering THAT place together.

Love the flow and the soft longing in this.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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5 posted 2005-02-08 11:55 AM


a garden waits

yes, we'll find the way

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6 posted 2005-02-08 03:07 PM


A wonderful wonderful write you leave for us today Sy!
And, may I add...a very very happy albeit belated birthday to you!
Hope you had a wonderful day!!
~Smiles, Hugs & Birthday Smooches, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-02-08 05:02 PM


Margherita
Thank you sweet.

passing,
I know you will.

Nancy,
It's true the 7th was my birthday. Thank you so much.

Larry C
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8 posted 2005-02-08 08:24 PM


Sy,
I do believe your wisdom will lead you there, kind sir. I do admire you so...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

iliana
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9 posted 2005-02-08 09:14 PM


Sy, my sentiments most of the time..... and then I go and get attached again. lol  Really, I think you've expressed something that travels my mind just perfectly!   ......jo
Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-02-08 09:47 PM


Larry,
You are a kind man, thank you.

iliana,
It seems to be one of the roads people travel, thank you.

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