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jennirey
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0 posted 2005-02-07 07:20 PM



To protect you from your thorns

I’ve watered and fed and loved your every change. I’ve encouraged all of your growth with ardent amusement in the uniqueness that is you.
I’ve watched you grow from a small seedling, to a beautiful thriving budding plant.
I’ve shaped and molded you to be unique and outstanding in all ways.
As I stand in awe of the beauty you’ve become, the blooms on your heart are so complex so knowing and wise, yet still very fragile and so easily bruised.

Your thorns may prick your essence; I yearn to protect you and cant.
I’ve tried so hard to be your only need. But as I stand in awe of the wild blooming garden you have become- I realize that there is just some knowledge that cannot come from mothers loving hands.

Your need to seek outside the garden walls that I have built so well, has startled and scarred me. As I watch you outgrow, the bed that I’ve prepared, I also understand that I cannot protect you from your thorns. I can only make sure your roots are free from the gnarled and tangled weeds that threaten to choke you as you continue to bloom.

Please understand my goal is only to watch you become your rose. As I fight myself to protect you from the bitter thorns that threaten to destroy your essence that I’ve come to know and love so well.



© Copyright 2005 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-07 07:23 PM


oh so lovely and giving of a beautiful word gift. Well done jennirey!
the_loner_23
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2 posted 2005-02-07 07:27 PM


This is a very beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

jennirey
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North Richland HillsTx
3 posted 2005-02-07 08:55 PM


Thank you, My 14 year old Daughter is going through some tough times growing up. We are all battleing the illness that haunts her mind together. We have a long road to climb still.

Jen

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2005-02-08 02:50 AM


prayers are with you
GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2005-02-08 07:14 AM


As a 17 year old girl who's mom left years ago...
I find it wonderful to see a mother's love here,
depicted so beautifully,
and with such obvious love, care, and concern.

I hope the absolute best for her...
and pray for you all as you continue to try
and guide her vines, in the direction
they should grow.


Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
6 posted 2005-02-08 09:13 PM


Praying for you both...this was beautiful, Jennifer!  

God Bless,

Becka

iliana
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7 posted 2005-02-08 09:31 PM


Jenni, totally understood from one mom to another.   ......jo
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