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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-07 07:33 AM


we were weave fingers
blending shimmer and sigh songs
into our mantle
we wore the sky colors
on our passion's skin

you gave me your eyes early
and closed them at our dawn
I touched your neck there
under your hair edges
and gave you my wandering

we were metal shapes
meld welded seamless
we were viscid hounds molten
into our own flavor rivers
we were slow flood gloves

surrounding day dreams
that bathed us in nightskins
and whispered to our ears
the voiceless words
of a lover's psalm
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-07 07:39 AM



Good morning to you, too...

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-02-07 08:26 AM


sticky atoms wearing the same name?

Tremendous right....

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2005-02-07 08:32 AM


grinz big guy...

loved this.
Good morning D~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-02-07 08:33 AM


liked your weavings between
erotic and the science lesson
youre a lovely teacher

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-02-07 08:37 AM


ms sunshine...thanks to you and good morning lady friend.


______________
ms lee j, slow hugs to you and thank you for your eyes

______________

ms gs, a gentle touch by you warms my day, thank you


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ms inky, can you stay after class for a while please..it may tie you up for a few hours

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6 posted 2005-02-07 09:04 AM


you gave me your eyes early
and closed them at our dawn
I touched your neck there
under your hair edges
and gave you my wandering


This has the feel of either partner writing,
so well do you pull the reader in.

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-02-07 09:09 AM


ms catrina
thank you lady for your eyes

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2005-02-07 10:55 AM


we were weave fingers
blending shimmer and sigh songs
into our mantle
we wore the sky colors
on our passion's skin

yes - am woven into the fabric of this - love it -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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9 posted 2005-02-07 11:00 AM


you wearing sky colors

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2005-02-07 11:04 AM


susan,
it is a satin piece
melded in to a shadow tattoo
thanks hon for the touches

______________

lady lauren
and you are sigh sky colors
with your tender touch, thanks to you

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