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Open Poetry #34

When she feels for me

Brad_Smith
Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 70
Dallas, Texas

0 posted 2005-02-07 12:14 PM

I see her there, still
perfectly frozen
bathed in blue

I've never seen such beauty
in the morning sun

warm and orange
a face a glow

tears streaming down her cheek
for me

I turned and looked away
in the hungarian's bunk

on the train
that day

She cried for me
and I couldn't look at her
angrily

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-07 12:17 PM

oh this tugs on heart strings. Beauty and pain all wrapped up into one. Well done Brad.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-02-07 12:36 PM

beautiful and sad
nicely done

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