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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-02-04 07:43 AM


you were just a bit hesitant
about how you felt
about being a statue
bronzed in leather
and bagged bare with steal

with edges at your pleasure
you said the road was rough
but you liked the feel
of us knocking knicks together
and making dent intentions

and could we tumble faster
just a little for awhile
til we reached the water
of our favorite cove
where I would be your sundown

and you would float my warm
against the cleft of your bow
welding the tin of my beard
to your shiver locks willing
mating me last as captain

of your soothed sin canoe
______________

dark

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-02-04 07:56 AM


mmmm would sail that vessel any day Dark.
Morning hugs sir.  

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-02-04 08:04 AM


mating me last as captain


your mind is precious...
Morning kiddo...   Wishing you a gr8 weekend...Go EAGLES!  hehe

Your rootin for em, right?

hehe

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-02-04 08:36 AM



Wonderful write, DS...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-02-04 10:31 AM


a tumble - making dents - ending up in a cove with a canoe- me pocahontis - come captain and float my boat! tee hee

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-02-04 10:36 AM


awesome write
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2005-02-04 12:48 PM


let me be the canoe
you paddle

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