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Valentine Challenge |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Do You See Vapor of spring rising? Mountainsides white? Melting into water cities Since you’ve smiled Southern winds turning face Toward sounds low-flying Grassy orchards, dancing day Nests of heaven shining twilight inferno Adorned with blending Fireflies, pulse, stirring light Young sweet thoughts stream Like pussy willows swaying Warm breeze epics passion Appreciated, adorned Your being Ripples of charm freely offered Kind eye herbs, gentle voices Giggling foolish musicals Blushing, stammering, teaching Embracing fluted esteem Echo sage siblings Maple sugar light of day Seeps deep to the spirit Soul writers compassion Looking to large trees of horizon Fruit dripping Moist green moss world Gathering gold circles I believe the storyteller in my core Openhanded attachment to wonder Wearing child bonnets Collective conscious Simply arsenal…. Diamond glinted spirit world Milestones experimentation Verse to grace omnipotent Touches softly haïr Touches warmly face Tenders ruby lips, ardent fulmination Hunger… Breath…..please Be composed of the longest prose Alive… You are the best part of the day |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lee this is absolutely beautiful! .....the last line just sums it up so nicely...what a way to tell someone how special they are...  ~~*~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I could read this to you and make you smile with my additions between the lines enjoyed your woman heart here Lee J |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yep, what L said. The best part of any day is when someone special makes us smile. Well met challenge hon. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Way to go Lee J. Great one girl! JL  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Enjoyed every line and flavor of this -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"Openhanded attachment to wonder"--this spells Lee J.! I'm intoxicated with your fantastic imagery! A keeper for sure. Happy soon to be Valentine's Day! misc'e |
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