Open Poetry #34 |
Lifted up by her wings. For Rebecca (WhtDove) |
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I have soared past mountains steep through old valleys wide, over great ocean deep with a White Dove, by my side I was lifted up by her wings, and how that shook me so and as she watched the rain pour from me she never let me go She stayed until I laughed, and helped me to pray she showed me where the lord was on that hopeless day I felt his hand upon my shoulder, I felt his gracious love thanks to Rebecca, our one and only Dove. I will never forget that day Thank you Rebecca.... You are our White Dove, truly a special Angel Prayers and thoughts continue note: this was taken and edited (big time)from an old poem Rebecca challenged me to write back in '99' |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Livingstone Seagull has to have some influence. Great words and I felt like I was reading Jonathon Livingstone Seagull again. I could feel the wind, the rain, the clouds, the spirit. Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know how proud Rebecca was of you then for accepting her challenge - I know how proud she is of you now. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Maree makes me want to give you the biggest dang big ole Canuck hug this does. Becca has sure had that effect on people, always has, as does her Mom, Rae. They shine in their faith for all to see proudly. That girl can sure rub off on you, which can only be a good thing. She is now, and always will be an example to anyone who is facing darkness, on how to find God's light. Hey girl, God bless ya! God bless our Becca too, but I think she has that one covered herself pretty well. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH my sweet maree... she is indeed lifted up by her wings and no ma'am, not too late Becky is a part of everything now. *hugging you hard* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful...she is with God now. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Maree...your timing is always there with the Angels... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I had forgotten to mention to you in my earlier post that I sent this poem onto Rae, Becca's Mom to read to her earlier today. Maree, I too have been lifted, and certainly even shoved with those wings of Becca's myself on occasion. She will be one great angel that girl, as she was sure an earth angel loved by so many! May she now rest in peace with her God. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hankie alert what a doll you are Maree, whew! such a tender beautiful thank you to our very own White Dove |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree...Your love is very special still, to her! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Maree...what a wonderful tribute to one who carried many of us on her wings |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loving words, Maree M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
holding you and her family all tightly...and knowing with peace that an angel has gone home. HUGS |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful as she must have been somewhere she flies not far from where your words took flight |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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