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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-03 08:29 AM



speak to my songs
with your music
sway your whim of strum

and use my fingers
like a lover's spend
I will bring the cotton

and warm the oils
to build you sinful armor
that blushes your nature

but sooths your unnatural
and you will part the seas
with your rod speak

you will bid me drink
from a shivering shore
where melded are our shadows

and our thoughts are string
scattered in each other's trees
limbless without winter

windless without sun

__________

dark


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Catrina
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1 posted 2005-02-03 08:30 AM


and our thoughts are string
scattered in each other's trees
limbless without winter

windless without sun

~*~

pretty ribbon wrapport here...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-02-03 08:30 AM


oh sigh...
damn...
sigh...

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-02-03 08:46 AM


I'm taking each of your fingers into mine, one by one, playing with them, while searching your eyes...

soul music touches

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-02-03 08:46 AM


and our thoughts are string
scattered in each other's trees
limbless without winter

windless without sun


~
you say it better then anyone could....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-02-03 08:57 AM


ms kitty, thank you lady friend for the reads

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donna...I sure love your damns, thank you

_________________

lee j..careful now I have very strong fingers, you may get caught, thank you hon for the smiles

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lady lauren, you bless me fair one, thank you for the moments

Susan
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6 posted 2005-02-03 10:30 AM


Had you heard me last night - in the tub - singing off key and silly - perhaps you'd not want songs - but then again - maybe you would've joined in  

I love the thought of thoughts as strings - and the intimacy of this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-02-03 10:47 AM


I watched your mouth moving
but didn't hear the words
my mind was swimming
thanks lady love for your eyes

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8 posted 2005-02-03 10:49 AM


loved it


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2005-02-03 10:57 AM


ms groves, thank you for the eyes and smile
passing shadows
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10 posted 2005-02-03 11:19 AM


nice one
Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-02-03 11:21 AM


you are the nice one!!  thanks ps
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