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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-02-03 07:59 AM



you took me behind your mind
to that kitten play place
and told me secrets
your mother never knew

I drew circles on your doll
and practiced kissing
you said I was bad
for not wanting to stop

but you liked me bad now
since you got the book
and looked at the pictures
with your eyes closed

and I guided your fingers


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Catrina
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1 posted 2005-02-03 08:13 AM



No, mothers never know
all the secrets...and
daughters never know
theirs, either..

You make such a lovely playmate...

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2005-02-03 08:18 AM


Hey D darlin' can you teach me to read with my eyes closed?
Love the playful in you. Long morning hugs to you.

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-02-03 08:30 AM


morning to you....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-02-03 08:47 AM


guess it wasn't a comic book, huh?

smiles and hugs


Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2005-02-03 08:58 AM


mmmm you ladies just make me all grinny with your touches..thanks to you
Susan
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2005-02-03 10:27 AM


I really hope the book is a "never ending story" - you can read with me anytime -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-02-03 10:49 AM


shall we mark the places
we want to read again
with our eyes closed
thanks soothsin

MGROVES
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8 posted 2005-02-03 10:51 AM


you can read this book with
your whispering fingers anytime


inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2005-02-03 10:53 AM


i like it when
you purr in kittyspeak
makes you more cuddly wuddly than ever

Martie
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10 posted 2005-02-03 10:54 AM


DS

There is something about you, that the little girls inside the woman trust.  I think it's goodness.  

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2005-02-03 10:59 AM


ms groves, you make me smile with your touch, thank you.

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ms inky, I be cuddlesome got huggies?  thank you babe

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ms martie..shhhhhh what about my bad boy image...thanks neighbor lady

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displaced
12 posted 2005-02-03 11:18 AM


a cool write...if hot can be cool
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2005-02-03 11:22 AM


ahhh ps...can I hug you
thanks lady

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