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Open Poetry #34
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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
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0 posted 2005-01-26 06:34 PM

Whispers of love falls
From a hushed mouth
A finger of forever is gently
Placed on reddened lips.

Tears fall from blue eyes
Falling onto the winter ground
Gentle whimpers are heard
In the resounding silence

Then…

Forgotten words are
Spoken in feverish gasps
As her loved one
Says goodbye

As he leaves
He turns around
He speaks gently
In her ear

Never forget…
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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2005-01-26 08:03 PM

Reminds me of an old movie…
Beautiful write sweetcollege_girl
(Love Song.  Old, old, old movie.
Geeee-wizzz, where does the time go?)

JL


sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
2 posted 2005-02-03 11:15 AM

Thanks JL..your reply is appreciated! Sorry it took so long to reply..guess you are the only one that will! Thanks again!

~~SCG~~
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