Open Poetry #34 |
'Tis not Some Verve of Want |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Tis not Some Verve of Want Sensual indulgence is not enough, for it culminates slowly to this, my culpable grief. Appetite that would soften quick, doth not know calenture, nor could it appreciate its’ myriad nuances. For inasmuch as passion be abstruse liquid, regardless ‘tis not some verve of want, a conclusive thrust toward beatitude. Less innocent of twilight be love, yet slower to wed to the heart. She is a slivered kiss beneath a Prussian moon; Vienna waltzed within the heart, the courtly orchestration of grammar, aimed to arouse from stammer to cadency, both body and mind. When love be readily a volition to be or not, she is just a Jezebel, an abstract feigning, which upsurges when inclination would don raven hosiery. I love thee more than that. Can I have this dance? Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gawd, this is dreamy! sigh. very well done sir. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
She is a slivered kiss beneath a Prussian moon; Vienna waltzed within the heart, the courtly orchestration of grammar, aimed to arouse from stammer to cadency, both body and mind. you play a melody that captures in sweet rapture - mmmm - absolutely love this part - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well done :bravo:....she is lucky to dance through life with you, dancing to and fro, with words of poetry. The dance of love, of life, what a dance it is! ~ARH We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
yes |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there is no comment I could think of which would glorify the essense of this poem...except...sensual and delicate...spiritual... |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Sweetie, I love this piece. Makes me feel warm all over. I'm certain Michelle will love this one as well. Hugs to you ;-) Amour Vous Always, Within this heart you'll find love |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
the entire feel to this piece is soft and dreamlike... i love the image of Prussian moon tenderly strokes the heart. ~~~~~~~ |
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