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MGROVES
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0 posted 2005-02-02 10:43 PM



Roses
the color
of fire~
violets
the feel
of desire~
sugar
whispers
so sweet~
passion
feels one's
beat~
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1 posted 2005-02-02 10:51 PM


  Wonderfully met, Lady Lauren will be so pleased!
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2 posted 2005-02-02 11:21 PM


Like how you slipped "red" in there without actually saying it

challenge nicely met -

Susan

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3 posted 2005-02-02 11:28 PM


yea!!!  thought it was about time i tried one of your challenges.~

thankyou for


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4 posted 2005-02-03 08:25 AM


  

nicely done Marsha.....you met the challenge well!

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5 posted 2005-02-03 08:49 AM


beautifully done...loved this
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6 posted 2005-02-03 05:48 PM


Very inspiring indeed, dear Marsha!

Love, Margherita

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7 posted 2005-02-03 07:45 PM


Beautiful!

~Alli~

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8 posted 2005-02-03 08:34 PM


Marcia~
Makes me so happy to see you word-form stretching~
Love you gal~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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9 posted 2005-02-03 08:37 PM


Very good one Marsha.

Dave

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