Open Poetry #34 |
The Crush of Spine (EV2 & Snow duet) |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
The Crush of Spine These hands, open books a story left for lips, unspoken to touch with breath and fold our secrets, a dog-ear reminder waiting ... for the crush of spine to palm, when fingertips stroke the vellum of sensuality, and eyes, esurient with need, wantonly lay bare the, "you," of now. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
oh wow. you did a great job! i love how you wove it all together, sweetie. perfect!!! thank you! ~~~~~~~ |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it. You done a great job. ;-) Amour Vous always Within this heart you'll find love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow you two are good |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"and eyes, esurient with need, wantonly lay bare the, "you," of now." I like this especially. Good write! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful weaving. I hope you duet again soon. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good writing..thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
magnificant |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great duet..you can feel the passion you both share for eachother! ~Love and Hugs ~ARH We attract hearts by the qualities we display, we retain them by the qualities we possess.~Jean Baptiste Antoine Suard |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
two of my favorites blending - damnation - this is fabulous Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
:-) thank you for the comments ~~~~~~~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Compelling read. JL |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
alli, jl we thank you both for your comments! |
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