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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-02-02 10:36 PM


"Tah dah la la la"

No chocolate could sway me
like the gray blue of your eyes
No cards could even move me
like the softness of you touch
No  jewlery  could take me
like your whisper in my ear
No poem could inspire me
like your dimpled smile does
No flowers could flatter me
Like the way you look at me

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

[This message has been edited by Juju (02-03-2005 10:09 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-02-02 10:37 PM


Simply lovely! challenge well met.
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2005-02-02 10:43 PM


well met and well done.....hugssss Juju....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2005-02-02 11:17 PM


love it


Susan
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4 posted 2005-02-02 11:29 PM


love the love in this -

Susan

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Juju
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5 posted 2005-02-03 10:09 AM


Thank you

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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