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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-02-02 03:01 PM


I see her, shining there
her smile lighting the day
a mothers pride wrapped in golden
illuminating life along the way

while allowing herself
   when needed
to remain in shadows dark
so that other lights can shine
and show off their own spark.

Now mind you,
   without fail
when ominous clouds
would turn the skies to gray
with certainty     rest assured
that Suns beams will return

and wrap you in warm
and loving stay.





The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-02-2005 09:12 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-02-02 03:03 PM



I know for a fact that my daughter is going to smile...and she has a very, very beautiful smile...

thank you for this, little one.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-02-02 03:12 PM


and I cannot wait to read her...

A marvelous tribute for two wonderful gals....


Martie
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3 posted 2005-02-02 03:47 PM


Donna...you write this in a loving way...just the way it should be.  You are special too!  
JL
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4 posted 2005-02-02 03:52 PM


Another excellent write.

JL


Opoetry4me
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5 posted 2005-02-02 04:33 PM


How sweet! Capturing what moms do and get little praise for. Excellent.


passing shadows
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6 posted 2005-02-02 04:35 PM


a beautiful gift
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7 posted 2005-02-02 06:54 PM


Lovely write!

~Alli~

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8 posted 2005-02-02 07:05 PM


yes this is beautiful, and loving, and wonderful for the both of them, and looks beautiful on you, the author ... I know I am rambling, but the jist is that I love this
Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-02-02 07:24 PM


Kari...
I hope she will feel very welcome here and how can she not see how very much you spread sunshine to all here??

Thank you everyone for your kind words,
you are all precious.

The One & Only
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10 posted 2005-02-03 09:39 AM


smile i did thank you, by the way mom is not only mine to keep, i love to share her with ones in need, that is why i love her so!
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2005-02-03 10:15 AM


One and Only, I can see that the beauty she has in her soul also resides in you.  Welcome to our home in blue.
Consider yourself family.  

inkedgoddess
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12 posted 2005-02-03 10:41 AM


this is heartspeak and sunspeak at its finest
very pretty word wise

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