Open Poetry #34 |
Suns Beams (for Sunshine and One and Only) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I see her, shining there her smile lighting the day a mothers pride wrapped in golden illuminating life along the way while allowing herself when needed to remain in shadows dark so that other lights can shine and show off their own spark. Now mind you, without fail when ominous clouds would turn the skies to gray with certainty rest assured that Suns beams will return and wrap you in warm and loving stay. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-02-2005 09:12 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know for a fact that my daughter is going to smile...and she has a very, very beautiful smile... thank you for this, little one. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I cannot wait to read her... A marvelous tribute for two wonderful gals.... |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...you write this in a loving way...just the way it should be. You are special too! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Another excellent write. JL |
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Opoetry4me Member
since 2002-10-11
Posts 126Dixon, Ky USA |
How sweet! Capturing what moms do and get little praise for. Excellent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful gift |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yes this is beautiful, and loving, and wonderful for the both of them, and looks beautiful on you, the author ... I know I am rambling, but the jist is that I love this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari... I hope she will feel very welcome here and how can she not see how very much you spread sunshine to all here?? Thank you everyone for your kind words, you are all precious. |
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The One & Only Member
since 2005-01-26
Posts 58Kansas USA |
smile i did thank you, by the way mom is not only mine to keep, i love to share her with ones in need, that is why i love her so! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
One and Only, I can see that the beauty she has in her soul also resides in you. Welcome to our home in blue. Consider yourself family. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is heartspeak and sunspeak at its finest very pretty word wise |
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