Open Poetry #34 |
Soft Memory (Gentle Spirit&Greeneyes) |
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I still feel this touch of petals brushed against my soul wind sings in whispers a murmured hush I recall how lips, pouted in loves suggestion Before winter comes and leaves my heart cold -- stones of past will turn their colors like the sea when it rains a place remembered-- for awhile: I would dream you in Autumn on a platform of shadows that would blend the pristine of winters white and hues of yesterday melding them into rivers of the coming spring that would carry me back to precious moments that left my heart warm I, left breathless, caught by the moons silence watching rain carve morning into earth soft ~~*~~ My Shadow is the only one that walks beside me ~~**~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...ok, you two... I've been waiting for this... and it's a and now it's mine... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I cannot tell who wrote what. This is so beautiful... Excellent work you two. ~tier |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Donna~ simply thank you luv you ~~*~~ My Shadow is the only one that walks beside me ~~**~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kari, Tier, thank you both. L~ you knew just when I needed this smile, thank you.. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
that would blend the pristine of winters white and hues of yesterday melding them into rivers of the coming spring that would carry me back to precious moments that left my heart warm I, left breathless, caught by the moons silence watching rain carve morning into earth and you leave me breathless, as always Marvelous read! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lauren & Donna, you two are most assuredly from the same soul family! Each of you must have placed a hand on a divine feathered quill to produce such lovely poetry. May you both continue to make soft memories in your lives. Love & Light, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious! I love when two poets blend together so well |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Lovely! Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My thanks to each of you, you are truly kind. Linda, she is indeed a sister of soul, thank you. ~Lady Lauren~ and thank you for the beauty in this... |
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