Open Poetry #34 |
Relics of the days – And so they fall |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Relics of the days – And so they fall quote: They haven’t killed the cowboy yet, not here where cattle trails are still visible from the sky where wagon wheel trail-lines are the hawk’s east and west and the cowboy can still be heard, whistling against the wind. The cowboy once was the baddest of the bad, when a horse’s power was grilled against the steel of the rifle, staunch against the shot, and loyal to the bone, no matter how bad the cowboy, for it was the horse he loved. The romantic void in a heavyweight time drew writers to depict a cowboy for who he was, no malingerer here, and somehow…it drew the ladies in, the young boys as well, who was that masked man? and suddenly a white hat appeared, one or two cowboys became western justice, even while wearing the grit of storms. They flash forward now, one hundred years, and can enter an opera hall, an auditorium, or community center, the show before them, raucous, unmannerly, ill-worded, wild and not without hoots, yells and whistles, and more, and they pull out a copy of H. G. Well’s The Time Machine- An Invention and wonder where these creatures came from. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...[/i] [This message has been edited by Sunshine (02-03-2005 05:29 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
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The cowboy once was the baddest of the bad, when a horse’s power was grilled against the steel of the rifle, staunch against the shot, and loyal to the bone, no bad how bad the cowboy, for it was the horse he loved ah...the cowboy days and cowboy ways... when men where more than just men.. lol....Love this piece of nostalgia lady. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I just knew, I should have been a cowboy!! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this. I ride an iron horse and relate to the old west. Think mabe I was born out of time. LOL! Wonderful gift for my eyes Sunshine. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Now we know, don't we....that masked man was....us. Europeans and some effete wannabe Europeans in this country, whine that we are a country of cowboys, but that makes me proud. A cowboy was strong, independent, honest, humble, willing to work for every penny and every bite of food, and true to the things he loved. Considering what I've seen of Europe and Europeans, not to mention the wannabes, yeah...sign me up. I'll be a cowboy any day, and proud of it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
All I can say is: EEE-HAA! The opera house ain’t no place fer yer horse, lady. Unlessin’ he don’t drink too much. Whisky’s a nickel a-shot This write is a marvelous depiction of the way our legacy should always be remembered. My hero was John Wayne, as a cowboy. Enjoyed your write Sunshine. JL |
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