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Catrina
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0 posted 2005-02-02 12:14 PM



Between Earth, and Air

Only green grass would he lay
beneath these feet
yet he loves to see my imprint
in snow-tracks deigned to run
by his window
so he creates seasons
that I be young in all
only in green grass would he lay
me down

Only he gives me fresh air to breathe
filling my lungs
with scent of dew, and heather,
and of himself, salt, and warmth
so he creates seasons
that I might watch wind walk
only he gives me fresh air to breathe
him in

Then only in dreams, he loves me
between earth, and air
cossets my imaginings
of all that is to be
and lays me down beside him
that I might know                    joy
then in dreams, he loves me
in earth air scenarios

Yes, you do know me.

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1 posted 2005-02-02 12:18 PM


This is so lovely... delicate as air... but as substantial as earth... Beautiful work!
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2 posted 2005-02-02 12:24 PM


beautiful
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3 posted 2005-02-02 12:29 PM


very lovely....I enjoyed this ....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
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4 posted 2005-02-02 05:41 PM


This is really excellent.

I cant believe how few people have read it.

It is superb.

Dave

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5 posted 2005-02-02 06:33 PM


Lovely write!

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