Open Poetry #34 |
Between Earth, and Air |
Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Between Earth, and Air Only green grass would he lay beneath these feet yet he loves to see my imprint in snow-tracks deigned to run by his window so he creates seasons that I be young in all only in green grass would he lay me down Only he gives me fresh air to breathe filling my lungs with scent of dew, and heather, and of himself, salt, and warmth so he creates seasons that I might watch wind walk only he gives me fresh air to breathe him in Then only in dreams, he loves me between earth, and air cossets my imaginings of all that is to be and lays me down beside him that I might know joy then in dreams, he loves me in earth air scenarios Yes, you do know me. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely... delicate as air... but as substantial as earth... Beautiful work! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
very lovely....I enjoyed this .... ~~*~~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
This is really excellent. I cant believe how few people have read it. It is superb. Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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