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where niether one of us... |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I touch the depth inside you I never knew it was there Thought you were cold inside But found out that's only where the real you hides I wonder if I allow too much If maybe I should stop But with a single touch I know it doesn't matter Because deep inside, behind your eyes There's a place to find you Where you are you And I am me And neither one of us lies. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very nicely done Alicia...full of emotion. |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
thank you. i don't know that i know what i'm doing when i write about this sort of stuff though. but thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think the best way to write is from your heart! You did that well here in this piece! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I don't know what I'm doing either, half the time... keep writing |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
lol, thanks. Sometimes, it's better to not know what we're doing. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Outstanding...James |
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