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Streak . . . . haiku
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Streak . . . . haiku |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Flowers streaking past Trees bend in a long dry wind Spring rushes swiftly |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
time does go by so fast these days, doesn't it? nicely done |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh... I love this one!!! *S* I hope you don't mind me reading it again and again... for each read is a vacation from this cubicle... maybe some petals will catch in my hair. *S* Delightful!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed Makes me think of driving yesterday on the 57...and all those things streaking by...the freeway daisy nodding at me. And today, the Santa Ana winds blowing. A good haiku takes you way past the words to places in your mind and heart...that's what this one does!  |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Ice white melting slow Somewhere a daffodil bulb Begins a slow yawn |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
"Flowers streaking past Trees bend in a long dry wind Spring rushes swiftly" - - - - - - - - Rushes spring swiftly from damp soil wetland edges trees flower above |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
ah spring - she kisses the air sweetly with promise - may her promise be fulfilled soon  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
uf, i still like the winter, so full of white |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Oh yes...!! Good one indeed...~P |
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