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Open Poetry #34
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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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0 posted 2005-02-01 02:37 PM



Yesterday

Sitting on the beach waiting
for the sun to rise,
the thoughts of you entered
my mind with a smile.

Remembering the laughter,fun
we two shared.
As the sun begins to rise so
do the tears in my eyes.

Upon rising I slowly put the
memories of our time together away
for another day.

Walking away and wishing it was...
still yesterday.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2005-02-01 02:55 PM


thanks for reposting

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-02-01 03:30 PM


Be nice to see some other verses on this.

It feels like it could run.

Dave

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

3 posted 2005-02-01 10:19 PM


glad to see this...love it
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