Open Poetry #34 |
Seatscape |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a patient waiting, to know that one, or more might share this bench in the spring, fall, or summer months when daffies dill, bronze skins begin, or later when leaves are counted in their drift, easier to count than hairs on one’s head…more colorful… it is a enduring wait, I am anxious with eagerness so I wonder, if I were to sit, twice, imprinting some behind the mind thoughts… would you know that you are welcome, anytime? Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling at this - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That bet....would be a sure thing. You made quiet an imprint here, even without sitting.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
yes, and what a beautiful way to say it Karilea..... ~~*~~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A fun play with words here is your title and I really enjoyed your comparison of leaves with hair... this is very very funny and true. (Smiles) ...and what is that poking though the bench? A bush or simply something left up to our own discretion? Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I enjoyed this benchmark and keen wit! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I'm speechless... ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea/sissie I would love to sit with you on that bench, even now with it's cold thought of seatprint...but especially in spring! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
The Bench So innocently it beckons To those who wander by Depending on the time of day, The weather and your time, You will accept the call. It speaks of days gone past, Of others it has beckoned to. A mother and a child, An elderly gentleman Who sat to rest awhile. A woman of a certain age, A smile across her face. Ah, but of all those who Have succumbed to the invitation,. To sit and rest. It is “the lovers” that I recall. Not young, but elderly, Who sat there and gazed into each other’s eyes. Married many years? Perhaps in this day of longer lives, Could they be newly weds? I like to conjure up A story of people who sat there before. And see a picture forming of those, Who have filled their box of memories. The one I like the most, A couple no longer young, But with hearts bent in that direction Who choose to walk that path. And sat upon that bench. They talked of planting, A small flowering plant To grow silently, as a testament of their love. Sunshine, could not help myself.Loved the photo. marty |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
To all of you, and especially, Marty...who added a poem of her own, I thank you. I have a bit of bite from the "novel" bug right now, so if I "poof" myself for a while from writing my form of poetry, well, you'll all understand, right? Write. Just, write. Because what I do? Is because of all of you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
because of us? Hmmmm... Yes, we do bring to lips the thoughts that fill our glass to brimming over and bubbling, don't we? Keep with it Dear heart....dang the torpedoes, full speed ahead |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this makes me want to get out the ice scraper and scrape off enough room for two |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
i would sit a spell with you anytime! (brush off the snow) Rf |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I hope to sit on that bench with you one day Kari...preferably when the daffies are dilling heh Love it Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
So many ways to read this Sunshine. I love it. Dave |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Perhaps someday we'll sit upon that bench together and share a tale or two and a hug |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
bring the coffee |
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