Open Poetry #34 |
Suzie blooms...(for littlewing) |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Suzie asks me to post words but i'm deepset in the jaundice of january drinking chinamoon teacups brimming with cries of coldcats and shadow dancing with hit and run lovers, the moon is posing halfheartedly, with premonitions of approching forecasts, straining above the garage sale sign athat rusts now of one family's foreclosure, the snow grows golden with the pee of poodles and sombercoated news, but suzie blooms deep in the jaundice of january singing purple haze and reciting the classics, in her elton john hat she dances across the big piano and brings me the words of a pearl named janis, soaked with the tossed tears and the raunchy laugh of one aging goddess, i exchange my calamities and she offers me her cyberroses across the great divide of geography and cyberoceans suzie blooms. ** for all the cyberfriends that come to us from a place not based on longitude and latitude of conveneince, but on heart ** [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-01-2005 09:34 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mish, this gave me a smile for the beauty in it and in your closing comment and cuz I can just see Suzie dancin around in that big hat spreading her smile everywhere. Hugs to you both. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Roots dig deep drenched below the snow capped mounds of bitter life, struggling to breathe to grasp but one bit of oxygen curling, like tendrils warm in the dark dirt waiting for the day they can unmask themselves, crawling above a model of hierarchy to tip their lazy heads above the cold to greet the Sun. ---------------------------------------- Thank you, Michele, I absolutely adored and needed this. *laughing* because you described me perfectly up there ha-ha. Plus I missed your words. Look at yourself, you are always blooming. One day I will send you sunflowers. *smile* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Beautiful Ode to those who hear you and feel you beyond the limitations of space and time.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky your soft side has pretty ink enjoyed you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh this just beautiful |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
like a cyber hug much enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
amazing you! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
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