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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-02-02 08:57 PM



Shed The Tears Shallow
~*Marge Tindal*~

Shed the tears shallow
For one never knows just when
Heartbreak tides rush in
Smashing hard upon the shore
Leaving heart-corpses reposed


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
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1 posted 2005-02-02 09:00 PM


gotta watch for those impending floods -

enjoyed Marge -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Betty
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2 posted 2005-02-02 09:24 PM


This is good Marge.
Love ya,
Betty

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3 posted 2005-02-02 09:31 PM


hopefully it doesnt come my way any time soon, my eyes have been so puffy seems perminent along with dehydrated skin around eyes,you'd think one could run out of tears, but nope, not me.
i like this marge


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4 posted 2005-02-02 09:40 PM


anyway you shed them...this is good poetry
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5 posted 2005-02-02 10:09 PM


Hi Marge .... sometimes you've just gatta shed those tears.

hugs, Marti

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6 posted 2005-02-02 10:11 PM


darn floods sure can be sneaky can't they?  
Nicely done Margie gal!

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7 posted 2005-02-03 02:53 AM


Wise words, Marge, that remind me of something my mom said when I was a little girl.  Phrased eloquently.   ....jo
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8 posted 2005-02-03 02:58 AM


sigh
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9 posted 2005-02-03 06:01 PM


So true..... Hard -ouch!- but true....

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~Alli~

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11 posted 2005-02-04 11:27 AM


And even if one knows... they're still unprepared.

Beautiful write!

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12 posted 2005-02-04 11:32 AM


and these are the times which make happiness an even more valuable commodity...

Beautiful write lady

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