Open Poetry #34 |
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Shed The Tears Shallow |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores ![]() |
Shed The Tears Shallow ~*Marge Tindal*~ Shed the tears shallow For one never knows just when Heartbreak tides rush in Smashing hard upon the shore Leaving heart-corpses reposed ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
gotta watch for those impending floods - enjoyed Marge - ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is good Marge. Love ya, Betty |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
hopefully it doesnt come my way any time soon, my eyes have been so puffy seems perminent along with dehydrated skin around eyes,you'd think one could run out of tears, but nope, not me. i like this marge ![]() |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
anyway you shed them...this is good poetry ![]() |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Marge .... sometimes you've just gatta shed those tears. hugs, Marti |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
darn floods sure can be sneaky can't they? ![]() Nicely done Margie gal! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wise words, Marge, that remind me of something my mom said when I was a little girl. Phrased eloquently. ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So true..... Hard -ouch!- but true.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
![]() ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And even if one knows... they're still unprepared. Beautiful write! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and these are the times which make happiness an even more valuable commodity... Beautiful write lady |
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