Open Poetry #34 |
Compared to a fool |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Compared to a fool, the king of fools who thinks not of what he has done but what he has yet to do. love has fondled me amongst my thoughts and poisoned my very lips, an tender kiss believing it to be yours oh forgive my foolishness. Charms died beneath the achings of my heart rebirthing it to it's rightful ways, no lies be told. all but dreams dripping from fingertips dipped into the ink of scribbings the written verses of my love for you. Still the pages are blank like my empty mind i wished i'd taken more note of thoughts instead of living in fantasies that life longs to be oh let my soul remember the breaths that bring the words. Ah there she goes upon the clouds into the night but a distant star in the arms of a jealous moon why should my eyes be denied such beautiful sights let me see what lust has no part in seeing beyond the heart!. She falls amongst the hungry hands of all pray it's not to late to take her prize in love still if not whole when she laid within my arms i'd still care to her wounds as she would tame my charm. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is good |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Another fine piece of writing....one of your best! Loved it! ~ARH Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what an impacting ending...this was an engrossing read...your heart is deeply moving...thank you for sharing. |
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