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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2005-02-01 04:38 AM


Compared to a fool, the king of fools
who thinks not of what he has done
but what he has yet to do.
love has fondled me amongst my thoughts
and poisoned my very lips, an tender kiss
believing it to be yours oh forgive my foolishness.

Charms died beneath the achings of my heart
rebirthing it to it's rightful ways, no lies be told.
all but dreams dripping from fingertips
dipped into the ink of scribbings
the written verses of my love for you.
Still the pages are blank like my empty mind
i wished i'd taken more note of thoughts
instead of living in fantasies that life longs to be
oh let my soul remember the breaths that bring the words.

Ah there she goes upon the clouds into the night
but a distant star in the arms of a jealous moon
why should my eyes be denied such beautiful sights
let me see what lust has no part in seeing beyond the heart!.
She falls amongst the hungry hands of all
pray it's not to late to take her prize in love
still if not whole when she laid within my arms
i'd still care to her wounds as she would tame my charm.

© Copyright 2005 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-02-01 03:02 PM


this is good
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-02-02 05:52 AM


Another fine piece of writing....one of your best!

Loved it!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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3 posted 2005-02-02 08:54 AM


what an impacting ending...this was an engrossing read...your heart is deeply moving...thank you for sharing.
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