Open Poetry #34 |
a very good year |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"How's the wine?" He peered at me the glass was winking trick of light zipless as I licked my lips in prayer I'd said that silently blushing mad chablis I smiled fidgeting the parch... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love your writing!!!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Great imagery here gorgeous, I could see it all. another for the library Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I feel like I stepped in a room and stepped right back out, but Karen? I want the beginning and the end or the middle, or the rest of this! *smile* perfection, Lady, as always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a moment |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Like Sue says, you give us a paragraph, but ot the story. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yeah, what Ken said about Sue... More, please. Plate's empty! |
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