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Could Never Be
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Could Never Be |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Could never be the same again, Could never be the one, Could never touch the moonlight, Morning light, Time so right, To hold a key, To open the door, Could never be, Could never change the way, Could never change the weather, Today, The storm is here, Time surely running, Could never be, Could never be the one, For me, Could never be the love, Could never be the same, Could never be, Could never be the one For you, The night that never be the same, Calling out your name, Could never be the love for you, Could never be the same, again, Could never be..... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the storm clouds disappear and let the sun shine upon your days ~ and nights...  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh vandana...I understand  this achesmay your tomorrows be sunny and bright! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
could be many arms around you, now...just wait, and feel. Hugs, Rf |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A sad song, Vandana... so sometimes we have to gild the tempo and change it to a waltz... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
could never be....you are so right... good poem~ Love and Hugs~ ARh  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
friendship and warm hugs will always be here enjoyed reading you today Vandana  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Strong poem...so focused in an intensity of sad longings...warm wishes ~P |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
If this one doesn't put hearts through a wringer, I can't imagine one that would.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Could never be the one, Could never touch the moonlight, Morning light, Time so right, I love the rhythm in this. The sadness is felt. Love, Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
you know what they say, "never say, never." I hope things work out for you, Vandana. ...jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
your heart cries out in this one - great expression -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
there always is will always will be the one that stays behind after all that was to be said has been there’s the one that stays in closets of memories one that sits and smiles giving a glance of what was pure once forever surely so giving a thought of what could be ------------------ reminds me, we still have to do a duet, my friend sorry to have intruded your space... wishing you well... regards sudhir |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hugs and good thoughts sent your way |
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